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Delegation Ticket Command: scripts/validate-delegation-ticket.sh i-liked-you-all-four-seasons/volume-1/writing-session.md .session/delegations/writer-ch9-expand.md WRITER_OUTPUT_RECORDED @novelist-writer
Route Ticket Evidence: i-liked-you-all-four-seasons/volume-1/writing-session.md Status IN_PROGRESS Operation Type NEW_DRAFT route NEW_DRAFT stage WRITER_OUTPUT_RECORDED Next Action WRITER_OUTPUT_RECORDED Requested Scope of Work AUTUMN 브랜치(CH9CH12) 전체 재작성 — 이전 작업물이 분량 미달, 문장 퀄리티 저하, CH11 POV/성별 오류, CH12 파일 미존재로 인한 재작성 Completion Target CH9CH12 모두 최소 분량 충족 + 검증 완료 + manifest/evidence 갱신 Ledger Prefix through WRITER_OUTPUT_RECORDED
Writer: Expand CH9 (제9장. 축제의 끝에서) from the current ~4,579 chars to 11,700+ chars (target 13,000).
The existing chapter content is at:
/home/hana/documents/novels/i-liked-you-all-four-seasons/i-liked-you-all-four-seasons/volume-1/.session/current-work.md
Read the current file first. Then expand it by adding ~7,100+ characters.
The draft currently covers:
- Scene 1: Campus hallway encounter (cold start, awkward silence)
- Scene 2: Festival chaos (crowd, losing sight of 겨울, panic)
- Scene 3: Forest path apology ("미안해", hand-holding, resolve)
Do NOT rewrite what exists. ADD new content in these expansion areas:
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Before Scene 1: Add 여름's pre-encounter thoughts and sensory details (what was she doing before seeing 겨울? how nervous was she?). Show her checking her phone, practicing what to say, touching her bracelet anxiously.
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Scene 2 expansion: Add the moment where 여름 actually GRABS 겨울's wrist in the crowd (hand-touching detail — the first physical contact in 2 months). Add more sensory immersion: food smells, music, jostling bodies.
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Between Scene 2 and Scene 3: Add more movement through the festival — 여름 buying food (떡볶이) and remembering 겨울's preferences, sharing a small moment.
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Scene 3 expansion: Extend the "almost confession" moment — 여름 nearly says "사실은 내가 너를..." before getting interrupted or stopping herself. This creates setup for CH11.
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After Scene 3: Add an epilogue — 여름 returns home, replays the hand-holding moment, texts with 겨울, resolves more firmly. Connect to next chapter ("내일도 시간 돼?" / "응. 돼.").
You are writing in CLOSE THIRD PERSON POV (여름). Use 그녀/겨울 for 겨울. NEVER first person. NEVER masculine pronouns. Output the COMPLETE expanded chapter (existing content INTEGRATED with new content).